Monday, January 4, 2016

Novel Excerpt --- The Healing Of Eric Richardson

    Please Note this is a small excerpt of the novel I have been working on, I wanted to share this just so you guys can see what I have been up to lately. The title is tentative, but I think I like it much better than the two previous working titles I had (The Job, or A work in Progress). I hope you enjoy this. God bless you!


After church service Victoria thought her head might burst with all the things rushing around in her mind as she stepped into the quiet of her bedroom and shut the door behind her. The whole morning had been bittersweet. She had enjoyed breakfast and the church she attended with Eric that morning. The boys had even seemed to enjoy the children services too. Drake had such a good time playing with the kids and hearing bible stories that he made Eric promise to bring him back the following week; which is exactly what she was hoped would happen. Victoria couldn’t feel happy about it though, not really, because Drake wanted her to go too, and she hadn’t made up her mind yet if she was staying.
She had to make a decision though and soon. Garret had given her deadline and refused to continue seeing her if she kept this job, sharing what Braden had told her with him had only made things worse. She didn’t want to quit a job just to make him happy, she liked her job and didn’t feel threatened by anyone there…except maybe Jessica. But was the job worth breaking up over? Victoria asked herself again for what felt like the hundredth time as the ache in her heart deepened.
She had stayed up most of the previous night praying for answers, and she still felt completely lost, she still had no idea what to do. The easiest thing to do would be to give in to Garret's demands, then she could keep her new boyfriend and just get a new job. The problem with this was the nagging feeling that God had brought her here for a reason, a purpose, one that she had not yet completed. Victoria had tried desperately to explain this to Garret, but that’s when he told her if she didn’t quit by the end of the week, they were over. Her heart broke when he said those words and they had echoed in her mind ever since making her question herself.
Victoria laid down on her bed and clutched a pillow to her chest, and started to cry again, her face buried deep in the cotton and foam to muffle the sounds and keep Eric from hearing her again. Less than twenty-four hours before she had felt like life was wonderful and everything was coming together,  but now it was all crashing down at her feet. She felt like Garret was forcing her to choose between a man and God, not a man and a job. She wanted both, she wanted to please Garret and to please God, but the more she thought about this, the more she realized she couldn’t have both, she couldn’t make Garret happy and God happy if they wanted her in different places. Finally she accepted the hard truth, she was going to have to break up with Garret.
The revelation of what was necessary for her to stay on the path God wanted her on was no easier than flip-flopping she had done earlier. This felt like a direct punch to her already tender heart, but she knew trusting God and walking in faith wasn’t always easy. Paul had wrote in Romans 8:28 ‘And we know that in all things God works for the good of those who love him, and have been called according to his purpose’ now Victoria was going to have live like she believed this, she was going to have to trust her heart and her pain to God, and she was going to have to let Him be her strength because she knew she couldn't do get through this on her own. Victoria was now starting to realize that life as an adult Christian was never going to be easy, that following God was an all or nothing commitment that sometimes meant walking away from what you loved or wanted.  
“Victoria,” came Eric’s voice from outside her bedroom door with gentle knock. He was still concerned for her, she clearly wasn’t herself today and he hoped if he got her out for a while she may perk up and open up to him. “My mom just called, she wants to take the boys for the afternoon. I was thinking of going out for lunch and wanted to see if you were feeling up to it too? ”
Sitting up, Victoria wiped the tears from her eyes and swallowed the lump that had been building in her throat before answering him. Now that she knew the course she had to take, spending time with Eric and Braden was a welcome distraction. “Thank you Eric, that sounds nice. When should I be ready by?”
“My mom will be by in an hour, could you be ready by then? Nothing fancy, just casual lunch.”
“Not a problem. I’ll get changed now. Thanks again.”
“Sure. Meet you downstairs in an hour.” Eric replied smiling before he walked back across the hall to the nursery so he could start changing the boys into play clothes for their trip to the park with their grandmother.
  Victoria sat on the edge of the bed looking at her tear stained reflection in the tall standing mirror she had brought from her bedroom at her parent’s house recently. She was going to move forward. She would go have lunch with Braden and Eric, enjoy herself then come home and call Garret. It wasn’t going to be easy, and part of her really didn’t want to do it at all, but no one said doing the right thing was easy. Victoria sighed and wiped the tears from her cheeks before standing to her feet and starting to get changed out of her church clothes. It was a hard day, but it didn’t all have to be bad, lunch could be enjoyable if she just kept a good attitude and her mind off what she had to do next.

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